cwuntitled3So you say you're bored and lonely Wake up and see you're not the only one to feel that way Then reach out and grab a hand, but don't grab mine I feel much better now that I've lost my mindcwuntitled3
Groping my way through the darkness My light's gone out and I've got no spare Using my hands to find my way around Sorry, didn't mean to touch you there
You're on the inside wanting out I'm on the outside looking in Funny how we always want what someone else has And when we get it, we want our things back again
Yeah, I'm not too pretty and I've got a very dirty min
cwuntitled2Nature is releasing the full power of her fury, and all I can think about is you.cwuntitled2
The metallic smell of a summer rain assaults my nose, but all I can smell is your hair.
The thunderclaps slam through my ears, but I just hear your heartbeat as you lay next to me.
The lighting flashes, filling the room with light, and I see a beautiful angel in front of me.
You smiled, whispered tender words to me, and kissed my cheek. I didn\'t feel it. I never heard you. The wind passed through the curtains.
I cried. You dried my tears, but the floor still tast
cwuntitled1Yesterday I had a dream A dream about tomorrow Can\'t remember what it was All written in wave crashed sandcwuntitled1
It was a dream of crazy things Like you and I together Who would ever think of that You there holding my hand
My sanity I never questioned I thought I had a pretty good grip But I lost that grip when you kissed my lips And you spun my life around
They say that dreams should tell us something That we don\'t understand But I think this dream is telling me My world\'s getting turned upside down
Now pretending nothing
A Proper Spamming - Volume 2A Proper Spamming - Volume 2A Proper Spamming - Volume 2
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sir spam a. lot
welcome one and all to the official spamming of this page as per request of the owner. we ask that you keep arms, legs, and all other tentacles inside the vehicle at all times. exits are unavailable at this time due to renovation...please remain in your seats until the ride is over. photography is encouraged and your laughter is nearly required. *looks behind him....* at least i think it is....
i now pronounce this page OPEN FOR SPAMMING
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*Enters room...
Silence now my blackened heartsilence now my blackened heart stop this eager calling no one loved you from the start towards your death you're falling lonelyness devoured you as distance to them all just grew and now you stand here all alone abandoned on the minds dark throneSilence now my blackened heart
You tried so hard and failed as well as your wanting scares them off your needs imprisoned in a cell would take care of all the scoff and lonelyness devoured you as distance to them all just grew and now you stand here all alone abandoned on the minds dark throne
For pretty lies you always fe
It would appear I can see the future
Now get back here and submit something.
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It's good to know there is someone else out there with their head on straight enough to avoid the Linkin Park Crap.
I hope my comment wasn't discouraging, just make sure you pay attention to how others write; the rhythm, imagery, mood, and tone used by musicians you are listening too are important cahracteristics of poetry to understand. I find learning from them is the best way to further my writing, and thinking.
Also: If you haven't already I suggest looking up Leonard Cohen, and Jeff Buckley. Both are great song writers and musicians. Particularly look for Cohen's "Hallelujah" as performed by Buckley--it's knock your songs off awesome.
Keep at things.
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Cheers
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I can count forty fat women in spandex power-walking circles around me as I stare at a deserted baseball field, writing a rap in red pen on the back of a printed e-mail folded twice.
wow, i had an identy crisis
*really needs my own internet connection*
thanks for the spamming...
...figure i would say it finally under the right name
*makes my disclosure statement general...since i thought i was stina for a moment*
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...was wondering what happened to you all
*shakes head and doesn't even attempt to clean up the odd mess on my page...no human armed with a broom and a dust cloth could ever make a dent...so not even going to bother it*
What you know you can't explain, but you feel it. You've felt it your entire deviant life, that there's something wrong with the story. You don't know what it is, but it's there, like a splinter in your mind, driving you mad.
You take the blue pill, the story ends. Your browser closes and you believe whatever you want to believe. You take the red pill, you stay in wonderland. And, I show you how deep the rabbit hole goes.
I offer only the truth, nothing more.
Take: The Red Pill
Take: The Blue Pill
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thnx alot for your comment ..
really appreciate it .
thnx as well for adding the deviation to your favs .
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